Using Subordinate Clauses

After watching a short video (which was actually a video for pet food) for inspiration, we found out how to enhance our writing through the use of subordinate clauses.

If you want to find out more, you can watch a good video here.

Here is an example of Phoebe’s writing.

I particularly liked how she varied her sentence types, sometimes with the subordinate clause at the start, sometimes it was at the end and sometimes it was in the middle.  Well done Phoebe!